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Please go through the comments on your essay thoroughly and look for recurring points for development/improvement.

Please then read the exemplar that I have posted on OneNote (in "HW Essays") and do your best to draw comparisons in the analytical content and point development. It might be very useful to take one of your "big ideas" and compare it with one from the exemplar provided.

Please note down your findings/thoughts at the bottom of your essay scan so that I can see what you discovered in terms of how you can make further progress in your written assignments.